Talk:Bude

Opening paragraph
The opening paragraph contains some very unusual information and formatting. I believe this section would benefit from rewriting from someone a little more talented than myself. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Elit3powars (talk • contribs) 22:37, 12 March 2020 (UTC)
 * The opening section makes the same mistake as a lot of wikipedia profiles - it's too long. It's like an article before the article. The opening section is meant to be a summary of no more than a couple of sentences. All the interesting information currently contained in the opening section needs moving into the body of the article so it is better structured and easier to find. I have a list of other things I need to improve, but restructuring the article would make it far more usable and accessible.SandrinaHatman (talk) 13:49, 20 January 2021 (UTC)