Talk:Burhanuddin Harahap/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 15:27, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:27, 14 August 2022 (UTC)

Sources all look reliable and images are appropriately licensed; I have not reviewed the images in the navbox at the end.
 * Oh yeah, about that, I just remembered that the navbox tends to break in low res screens, so I reverted it to not contain any images.


 * "would involve him being nonactivated from vice-presidency": I don't know what this means.
 * Reworded. Better now?


 * "they both had South Tapanuli": I don't know what this means.
 * Missed a few words there. Fixed


 * Suggest linking Aceh.
 * Done


 * I think it would be worth making clear that the Second Ali Sastroamidjojo cabinet did not include Harahap -- currently we only say that most members of Harahap's cabinet were excluded.
 * Fair enough, done


 * "due to his cabinet's economic policy which was perceived to benefit": the policy is over a year in the past, so this would make more sense as "which was perceived to have benefited".
 * Done

Those are the only issues. The article is in excellent shape. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 17:40, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Aforementioned issues addressed. Juxlos (talk) 20:01, 14 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Changes look good; passing. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 20:31, 14 August 2022 (UTC)