Talk:Burnham Beeches, Sherbooke

Redevelopment section reads like a public relations firm wrote it
Various phrases in the "redevelopment" section do not sound like the language of an encyclopedia:

"globally recognized sustainable destination"

"Australia's finest"

"unique project"

Additionally, the address of a participant's Melbourne restaurant is apparently published.

I believe some tightening to a more encyclopedic standard is appropriate. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.94.241.240 (talk) 05:47, 16 August 2013 (UTC)
 * I have flagged the section as "written like an advertisement", hopefully this will attract a cleanup Felixphew ( Ar! Ar! Ar! ) 06:48, 17 June 2014 (UTC)

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