Talk:Butterfly (Kylie Minogue song)/GA1

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 14:22, 3 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Its release date should have a note regarding the song's initial press release for clubs
 * Done. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

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Lead

 * Light Year → Light Years
 * Silly mistake. Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

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Background and recording

 * Remove Steve Anderson's picture, doesn't add much detail to the article.
 * Steve is the co-writer of the track—I don't see any reason to exclude his pic here. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Removed Steve's pic since the article is already packed with two other pics Damian Vo (talk) 03:03, 6 June 2022 (UTC)


 * he composed the track on a piano and it started off as a ballad. → the track, which was composed on a piano, started off as a ballad
 * Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)


 * He recorded a demo of the track, which has drums, bass and Minogue's vocals on it → He recorded a demo of the track with drums, bass, and Minogue's vocals on it
 * Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

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Composition and release

 * which has a runtime of 4:09 → remove
 * Done. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)


 * and delivered lines such as "When I'm in your arms/I am safe from harm" → remove
 * Done. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Parlophone released "Butterfly" → Parlophone included "Butterfly
 * Done. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Light Year → Light Years
 * Not again T.T Fixed. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)


 * production group → English dance music production group
 * Added. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Due to a manufacturing error, a replacement cover insert was included in the maxi single release → the source stats "along with a really stunning & sexy 12" x 12" glossy print of the green variant artwork", quite different
 * Removed this sentence. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

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Reception and live performances

 * Fine

Track listings

 * Use spaced en dash, –
 * Added template. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

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Personnel

 * Use spaced en dash, –
 * Added template. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

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Chart

 * Use Template:Single chart
 * Using the template would produce something like this rather than this. This is the only way that I could use the Harvard citation template for the entire article. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Ok I get, makes sense. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:25, 6 June 2022 (UTC)

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Release history

 * It is missing the November 2001 date
 * Done. Damian Vo (talk) 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)


 * Add wheter the version is original or remixes
 * All of them are remixes – the original was never released as a standalone single/side-A only, as you could see in the "Track listings" section. 19:30, 5 June 2022 (UTC)

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Overall

 * Seven days to address the issues. Let me know once you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:09, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Are we sure these sales in the Uk are from areliable source? I mean the its the producer who is reporting them
 * Picchiotti is not only the producer of "Butterfly" but also the founder of Blueplate Records, the track's distributor in the US and the UK white label release. Therefore I think his statement regarding the single sales for "Butterfly" is acceptable. Sales statements from labels, not from the independent tracking firms like Nielsen or IFPI, can be found in articles like here Damian Vo (talk) 02:37, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Labels have a tendency to influent sales number as we all know. Henceforth they are not acceptable in various articles, the source you provided states those numbers are according to the label. I'm not saying that Picchiotti is lying, only that there is no reason to believe he is saying the truth either. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:29, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Removed. Damian Vo (talk) 14:47, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Not entirely, "According to Picchiotti, more than 15,000 double twelve-inch vinyl sets were sold within the first two weeks of release" MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:51, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Removed. Damian Vo (talk) 16:51, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
 * I made small changes, see if you agree with them. If so, I will pass the article. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:53, 7 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for shortening the caption perfectly :D Damian Vo (talk) 13:25, 8 June 2022 (UTC)