Talk:BuzzSaw (roller coaster)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 13:57, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass! Good work!-- Dom497 ( talk ) 18:41, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass! Good work!-- Dom497 ( talk ) 18:41, 11 June 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass! Good work!-- Dom497 ( talk ) 18:41, 11 June 2013 (UTC)

Comments

 * Not really a major issue but are there any pictures of the actual ride that can be used in the article?-- Dom497 ( talk ) 14:09, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
 * None that are freely available. Themeparkgc   Talk  07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)


 * The ride no longer the second tallest inversion....now its the third. You might need to change the refs with change as well.-- Dom497 ( talk ) 14:20, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed Themeparkgc   Talk  07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Shouldn't the marketing section be sub-section of the history section?-- Dom497 ( talk ) 14:09, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed Themeparkgc   Talk  07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Don't use "BuzzSaw" at the beginning of each paragraph in the characteristic section!-- Dom497 ( talk ) 14:09, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed Themeparkgc   Talk  07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)


 * "BuzzSaw's steel roller coaster track is 150 metres (490 ft) in length." - Maybe incorperate this sentance with the firs paragraph in the same section? It doesn't look right when its all alone :( .-- Dom497 ( talk ) 14:16, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed Themeparkgc   Talk  07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Be more specific on the roller coaster model. SkyLoop has 5 "sub-models".-- Dom497 ( talk ) 14:18, 9 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed Themeparkgc   Talk  07:18, 10 June 2013 (UTC)


 * Refs 11, 12 are dead.-- Dom497 ( talk ) 20:58, 10 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed Themeparkgc   Talk  07:35, 11 June 2013 (UTC)

All good!-- Dom497 ( talk ) 18:41, 11 June 2013 (UTC)