Talk:Byways Cafe/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 14:45, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Will review this article, and Pied Cow Coffeehouse later. Then I'll review the remaining 2 Agriculture GANs.  Gerald WL  14:45, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:26, 29 November 2020 (UTC)

Lead
(Finally, an American resto without eggs benedict! Ate that once in Singapore, it gave me brainfreeze).  Gerald WL  14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)


 * "such as corned beef hash, omelets, and pancakes." Link omelets?  Gerald WL  14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:24, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * "the city's "best brunch spot"..." Link brunch?  Gerald WL  14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:24, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * "after owners were unable to reach a lease agreement with the landlord." Link landlord, so that readers don't assume it's a land lord?  Gerald WL  14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:25, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Description

 * "Moon Portland says, "locals..." Maybe add a "that" between "says" and "locals," and remove the following comma? It's not like the description of locals coming in is an opinion.  Gerald WL  14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:25, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Link omelets?  Gerald WL  15:06, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:26, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Link blue corn meal in "blue corn pancakes" and blue corn in the following "blue corn"?  Gerald WL  14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:27, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Link pecan pie in "pecan"?  Gerald WL  14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * I linked "Pecan" since pie's not being discussed here. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:28, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Link French toast, Monte Cristo sandwich, biscuits and gravy, scrambled eggs, and license plates of the United States in "license plates"?  Gerald WL  14:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:29, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

History

 * Link kitsch in "kitschy," salt and pepper shakers, chrome plating in "chrome," and scone in "scones"?  Gerald WL  15:06, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:31, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Closure

 * Link landlord in "the building's owners"?  Gerald WL  15:06, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:31, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Link young adults?  Gerald WL  15:06, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * , I think this one's overkill. People know what a young adult means. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:32, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Update: I'm genuinely tearing reading the farewell. Reminds me of a lotta IRL stuff. Gimme a moment.  Gerald WL  15:06, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Reception
I'm back!


 * Link amaretto?  Gerald WL  15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:32, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Link caffeine in caffeinated?  Gerald WL  15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:32, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Link brunch?  Gerald WL  15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:33, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Link bell peppers?  Gerald WL  15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:33, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * "If you have a pit stop, pull up at the counter and order the hash." You mean hash the weed?  Gerald WL  15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Hash (food) is already linked within the article. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:34, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Link tchotchke and Americana?  Gerald WL  15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:34, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ""restaurant entrepreneurs would err..." Link to whatever "err" means, if none, a Wiktionary entry?  Gerald WL  15:17, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * This is a word I think most people know or they can look up. I don't think linking is appropriate or necessary. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:35, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Images

 * The portrait photo of the interior is similar to the landscape, so I didn't find it to be useful. I found this CC pic on Flickr, as well as this food photo. What d'ya think?  Gerald WL  16:43, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * , If you know how to get these on Commons, I'm willing to add to article. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Fuck! They're noncommercial. It's not allowed. I'll see if there's more. We should have more free stuff.  Gerald WL  17:25, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * The logo is under fair use, but I'm not sure if it needs to be. It's simple geometry and text, and qualifies public domain.  Gerald WL  16:53, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * , I'll let other editors decide if the image can be transferred to Wikimedia Commons or not, but hopefully GA nom is not impacted either way. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:59, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * , good news is, they don't. IMO, tho, Commons will house it nicely.  Gerald WL  17:27, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Overall
Fail or pass? .  Gerald WL  15:31, 29 November 2020 (UTC)
 * , Thank you! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:26, 29 November 2020 (UTC)