Talk:Cómo Dueles en los Labios/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:56, 8 October 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's my lot for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:44, 11 October 2021 (UTC)
 * "being empty" not encyclopedic in tone.
 * "as his companion" I don't follow this.
 * "four music journalists although" i don't think basic English terms like this need linking.
 * Silvio Rodríguez has a diacritic missing.
 * I would expect to see the studio information in the article, not just in the infobox.
 * "promotional tour of" no need to link.
 * "feelings -- like spite -- are" should be single en-dashes, not double hyphens.
 * The label is only mentioned in the infobox and not referenced.
 * Ref 1 should be an en-dash, not a spaced hyphen.
 * Ref 12, I think it'd be better to have Chicago Tribune in there rather than the web address.
 * Fix the link to this article in the Maná navbox at the bottom of the article so it isn't redirected.
 * I believe I have addressed everything on the review. This article isn't one of my finest moments, but there was limited information that I could gather from sources. BTW, would you be interested in reviewing Vuelve (album) which is currently a FAC? Erick (talk) 14:18, 14 October 2021 (UTC)
 * No pressure, but how are both articles now? Erick (talk) 09:53, 17 October 2021 (UTC)