Talk:C. O. Brocato/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 14:21, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 14:21, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

Comments
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 02:47, 1 September 2023 (UTC)
 * I copyedited the article here, let me know if you disagree with any of the changes.
 * I have some WP:OVERLINK concerns, like baseball and captain
 * There are duplicate links in the body of the article (baseball, captain, and senior)
 * Ref spot checks: 2, 4, 8, 12, 13, 15, 24, 26, 30, 34, 35, 38, 50, 53, 57, 60, 64
 * Your copyedits look fine. As for the overlink part, I delinked baseball, but captain I still think might be worth linking (I believe I've seen users asked to do so at FA before, but I could still change it if you want). BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:31, 5 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Passing. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 18:24, 5 September 2023 (UTC)