Talk:CHARA (array)

Overall, well written and formatted, and touches on key areas of CHARA's importance. Just a few minor things need to be touched up. I'm not sure how I feel about "Observation time at the array can be applied for at CHARA’s website" in the introduction, it makes it seem like you're trying to promote it. Under achievements, it may be better to organize things from earlier to later in time, your call on that as well. Finally, extrapolation of the units of measurement in the functionality piece could make the article more widely digestible. Other than these little things, great job.

This is a good start, but I would like to see a bit more detail throughout. Some of these suggestions were made in an earlier draft version--for example, can you discuss more of the technical specifications of the system's design? Does the center have any public events or conferences that you could summarize in a subsection? Are there images available in Wikimedia Commons that might augment your content? Happy to discuss with you further! Amyc29 (talk) 00:21, 26 October 2017 (UTC)