Talk:CIECAM02/GA1

GA Review
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This article does not meet the Good Article criteria. For starters, it is far too technical and not easy to understand (heck! I have a Ph.D. and I'm having trouble understanding all this!). Article sections are not organized very well, and most of the latter half of the article is just a collection of equations and graphs with a very poor description of how these equations connect together into the overall system. The article's text also doesn't really seem to point out much of the model's use, other than that it's used by Windows Vista's color system.

I also raise questions that the article meets the verifiability criterion (#2), as there are only six inline citations used by the article. Also, please move the non-inline-citations to a 'further reading' section, or convert them to inline citations. The only thing present in the reference section should be inline citations.

Sorry folks, but I'm afraid this article is quite a long way from being a good article. Dr. Cash (talk) 20:41, 25 July 2008 (UTC)