Talk:CRISPR Therapeutics

Improving the article
Hello, I am a student and I have to edit a wiki article as a homework. I am thinking of editing this article, my idea is to add a new section talking about “ Collaboration/partnership “ and mention all CRISPR Therapeutics collaborations and their work. Nabaa Abdullah (talk) 07:31, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Feel freed to do that.--Afus199620 (talk) 16:52, 7 December 2022 (UTC)

Biased language/tone, copied and pasted from company website
The introductory paragraph has a very biased tone and sounds more like it was copy/pasted from the company's website description; "CRISPR Therapeutics is a --leading-- gene editing company..." , "CRISPR/Cas9 is a --revolutionary-- gene editing technology that allows for precise, directed changes to genomic DNA."

"For more information, please visit www.crisprtx.com." -- clearly redirecting towards biased information source. 2601:182:CF00:F9A0:4993:29E4:FD40:FBCA (talk) 16:07, 27 February 2023 (UTC)