Talk:CSS Winslow/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 15:30, 21 August 2023 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this shortly. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 15:30, 21 August 2023 (UTC)

Prelim

 * No duplicated links
 * No images to check (perhaps something like File:Battle of Hatteras Inlet Batteries.png could be added?)
 * I've added the suggested image
 * No edit wars
 * Earwig report copyvio unlikely

Just a note to say that despite all appearances I haven't forgotten about this. Work commitments have left me with little free time; I hope to finish this within the week. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 18:28, 30 August 2023 (UTC)
 * No worries; I've been busy enough with work this week I wouldn't have been able to spend much time on this anyway. Hog Farm Talk 20:45, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Lede and infobox

 * Link gunboat
 * Done
 * "it was purchased" choose "it" or "she", but not both
 * Standardized
 * Link commerce raiding
 * Done
 * Is there any source that specifically mentions her being the namesake of Warren Winslow?
 * Not that I've seen, the fuller Warren Winslow name is only used in passing in the sources
 * Operator would rather be the CSN rather than wider CSA
 * Done. There are also situations (mainly along the Mississippi River) where the Confederate Army was operating the ships instead of the Navy

Service history

 * I think it would be useful to mention the Civil War itself somewhere in main text
 * Done
 * Provide the ship types for Beaufort and Raleigh
 * Done
 * Link commerce raiding
 * Done
 * "May and June 1861" repeated year
 * Removed year
 * "service with" not sure about this wording. Perhaps "service in" or "serve with"?
 * Done
 * Link prize
 * Done
 * "historican" sp
 * Oops, fixed
 * "July 1861" repeated year
 * Removed
 * "but were unable to due so due to weather" needs work
 * Fixed
 * Worth mentioning that according to DANFS Winslow carried Samuel Barron at Hatteras, and the men were evacuated to Goldsboro?
 * Added (Barron from Barrett, Goldsboro from DANFS)