Talk:Caddisfly/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sabine's Sunbird (talk · contribs) 06:31, 20 May 2017 (UTC)

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 * Fossil caddisflies have been found in rocks dating back to the Triassic;[3] the group survived the Permian–Triassic extinction event about 252 million years ago.  It's not clear what the second part of this sentence adds. Obviously its ancestors did survive that event, but since it's far from clear that the group existed before then you can't really say the group did.
 * Removed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:30, 20 May 2017 (UTC)


 * The affinities of the third suborder, Spicipalpia, I think this group needs to be mentioned in the lead, even if they aren't as numerous, because it was a surprise to suddenly realise there were three suborders.
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:30, 20 May 2017 (UTC)


 * The adult stage of a caddisfly may only survive for a few weeks; many species do not feed as adults and die soon after breeding. It's noted later that some adults eat nectar - but this info would be better in ecology than development
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:30, 20 May 2017 (UTC)


 * I'm totally biased but caddis larvae are important for some birds too, like dippers or some high river ducks. (You don't have to action this but I'm just saying).
 * I'm sure you are right, and amphibians too, but I found it difficult to find a suitable source. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:30, 20 May 2017 (UTC)


 * Development might be better titled Development and morphology
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:30, 20 May 2017 (UTC)


 * sclerotinised linked in development - probably more useful the first time the term turns up in evolution. Also, The heads are heavily sclerotinised  slightly contradicts that first section, which suggests some families arent sclerotinised much
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:41, 20 May 2017 (UTC)


 * Why doesn't the taxonomic list have the three suborders?
 * Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:41, 20 May 2017 (UTC)

A few things to address but then it's good to go. Sabine's Sunbird  talk  07:32, 20 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking on the review. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:30, 20 May 2017 (UTC)
 * I will leave to deal with the image issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:41, 20 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Done, I believe. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:37, 22 May 2017 (UTC)
 * And pass. Good stuff. Sabine's Sunbird  talk  08:08, 22 May 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:24, 22 May 2017 (UTC)
 * And from me. Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:04, 22 May 2017 (UTC)