Talk:Caffe Vivaldi

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Can somebody help to Capitalize the page title to:  Caffe Vivaldi

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 * Thank you to whoever swooped in and quickly capitalized the page title. I couldn't figure it out...

With regard to the immediate challenge to the page as being promotional, I thought I had made it as factual and encyclopedic as possible, using citations for everything. I had used CBGB, and Caffe Reggio, and Blue Note, and Smalls Jazz Club as examples for the wording for the page, but apparently appeared biased.

There is no attempt to be promotional because the announcement was just made public in New York that Caffe Vivaldi will be forced to close at the end of June. So there is nothing to promote. The attempt instead was to write about it before it closes.

I just went back in and deleted wording and passages that might be construed as promotional. I hope this helps so the page is not subject for being deleted. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nywk777 (talk • contribs) 02:01, 1 June 2018 (UTC)

Contested deletion
This page is not unambiguously promotional, because... (I thought I had made it as factual and encyclopedic as possible, using citations for everything. I had used CBGB, and Caffe Reggio, and Blue Note, and Smalls Jazz Club in New York as examples for the wording for the page. All of them note celebrities who have been at their establishments, as does almost every other music establishment and famous place that I've checked out on Wikipedia. I have gone back and deleted wording and passages that might have been construed as promotional or biased, and have quoted a passage noting it's source, where the wording might have sounded biased. I was not at all attempting to be promotional, as there is nothing to promote, since it has just been made public that Caffe Vivaldi will be forced to close in three weeks, on June 24th. But there is nothing yet published about that info, so that cannot be added yet to the Wikipedia page.) --Nywk777 (talk) 03:25, 1 June 2018 (UTC)