Talk:Cal (novel)

General Cleanup
Some grammar issues, etc. Overall, this reads something like a amateurish book report. --Undersea 15:40, 16 October 2006 (UTC)
 * And it's even kind of wrong in details. For example, it's not self hatred which makes Cal suffer, but his opinion that he's guilty for the morder of Marcella's husband, and he want's to make himself suffering. This arises in very much situations - it seems like the author of this book report hasn't understood what he has (probably ;) ) read. --84.178.45.6 23:02, 22 May 2007 (UTC) (IP, answer me at commons:User Talk:Sven)

I have rewritten a lot of the language to be better stylized and organized, but have not really touched the content per se, as I am not familiar with the novel. Still a lot of work to be done on this, as Undersea remarks, I get the strong feeling that this came from someone's homework assignment. Achromatic (talk) 22:49, 17 December 2007 (UTC)