Talk:Cal Yachts

Interealted articles
I'm trying to build some interealted articles regarding sailboats please be patient.

Thanks

Kevin Murray 05:54, 20 October 2006 (UTC)

This is not spam!

This is one among many articles related to yacht manufacturers. This has no more spam content than any article about a corporation or its prodcuts including: IBM, BMW, General Mills, Sony, Cadillac etc, where each article contains information on the history of the company and examples of the product, and links to the company website and frequently owners groups.

Please let this stub which I have started grow and thrive. If you have concerns please send me a message.

Thanks.

Kevin Murray 06:23, 20 October 2006 (UTC)

Tone
This article, though well written, does not have an encyclopedic tone. It reads more like a write up in a fanzine or boating magazine. It nearly gushes. Don't get me wrong. I think Cal is one of the best manufacturers of fiberglass sailers ever, but the tone of the article shows this and really shouldn't.William (Bill) Bean 17:36, 6 March 2007 (UTC)

I agree. This article needs serious editing. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.110.9.40 (talk) 16:54, 17 May 2009 (UTC)