Talk:Cale Morris/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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Lead

 * Delink American per MOS:OVERLINK

Early career

 * "Hayton was a friend of his sisters" - typo; sisters'
 * Wikilink goaltender
 * "Morris played AAA hockey with" - AAA hockey can be linked to Minor ice hockey

USHL

 * Wikilink Bartlett, Illnois
 * "with the Chicago Steel and lived with fellow Steel teammate Robby Jackson." - repetition of "Steel"
 * "Morris finished the season with a 19-6-3 record" - the hyphens should be en dashes
 * save percentage, shutout and goals against average should be wikilinked for those not well versed with ice hockey terminology
 * "While playing with the Black Hawks, Morris posted a 19-6-3 record" - all the hyphens highlighted in bold should be replaced by en dashes
 * "and was in the league's top goals-against average and save percentage."
 * "he went undrafted in the 2015 NHL Entry Draft." - this sentence should be cited to a reliable source
 * "he was selected to the USHL/NHL Top Prospects Game" - state what this is for those unfamiliar with the honor

Collegiate

 * "In his sophomore season, after beginning the season" - After beginning his sophomore season
 * Wikilink saves to Save (goaltender)
 * "to defeat the Michigan State Spartans in the Quarterfinals." - quarterfinals
 * "in the second round of the 2019 NCAA Division I Men's Ice Hockey Tournament against the UMass Minutemen, Notre Dame lost 4–0 and was eliminated from the tournament." - close reptition of "tournament"
 * "becoming only the second goaltender to wear a letter under head coach Jeff Jackson" - I think the middle of this sentence could be reworded a little for non-Ice hockey readers
 * Wikilink training camp

International play

 * "Morris was selected to play for the United States at the 2014 World Junior A Challenge." - perhaps state where the tournament was held?