Talk:Caleb Swanigan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 00:51, 4 April 2017 (UTC)

Reviewing later.&mdash; CycloneIsaac ( Talk ) 00:51, 4 April 2017 (UTC)

Lead:
 * "Swanigan originally committed to Michigan State, but later decommitted and committed to Purdue University." Shorten it to just "Purdue", or add "University" to the end of "Michigan State".
 * Done

Early life:
 * His birth should be mentioned somewhere early in the section.
 * Done
 * Use convert for the weights and heights mentioned.
 * Pretty sure I got them all, let me know if I missed one. Used height template instead, was more intuitive.

College career:
 * The 2017 section needs to be updated for the end of the NCAA tournament.
 * We could just pretend it never happened. Just kidding, I wrote it.
 * Gotta add this.
 * Yup, just came out, I'll add it. Haven't read this article yet, if it doesn't mention Swanigan's adoptive father is an agent I'll see if I can find something that ties the two together.
 * You know, I bet his father cannot do agent things. I read three articles and did not see a mention of it at all. So, this is now done.

Records:
 * "records for career points (1,649) and rebounds (1048)," Comma needed for second number.
 * Done

Awards and honors:
 * "Swanigan was also named the National Freshman of the Week." Any idea when he was named?
 * Done
 * "Swanigan joins Lonzo Ball, Frank Mason, and Josh Hart." For what?
 * Rephrased those sentences

References:
 * Some of the references are missing access dates.
 * Done
 * References 12 and 28 can be expanded a bit more.
 * Done, unless they moved around and I missed them