Talk:Caludon Castle/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 16:48, 27 September 2012 (UTC)

I will get to this over the weekend.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:48, 27 September 2012 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * house was given to Segrave family, I think you mean "the" Segrave family. Another license was received in 1354, and the castle was again rebuilt Use "building" instead of castle every now and then for the sake of variety.
 * Good points. Done. -HJ
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Fix the spelling in the title of MacKenzie and the capitalization cite #8. Provide place of publication for all books.
 * Done and done to the first two. I personally prefer not to give locations in book refs, and I don't think they're required; I've had several successful FACs and FLCs without them. -HJ
 * Not a requirement at this level, although I'm a little surprised that you got through FAC without adding them.
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * Provide conversions for all metric distances for all the poor benighted Americans. Clarify that there were two moats on the property.
 * Done. HJ Mitchell  &#124;  Penny for your thoughts?  19:26, 30 September 2012 (UTC)
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Thanks very much. HJ Mitchell  &#124;  Penny for your thoughts?  10:44, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Thanks very much. HJ Mitchell  &#124;  Penny for your thoughts?  10:44, 2 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Thanks very much. HJ Mitchell  &#124;  Penny for your thoughts?  10:44, 2 October 2012 (UTC)