Talk:Camden, New Jersey

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RCA
Some mention of RCA might be in order. IIRC, the Camden record label was named after the city and they had a pressing plant there. I remember seeing a large tank with the RCA logo from across the river.

Photos
Do we really need the first picture to be of the prison? Can anyone find a better picture?

Camden famous persons' list incomplete
I think boxing champion hall of famer dwight qawi (born dwight braxton)grew up in camden - altough born in baltimore - should be included in the famous persons' list. His monicker was 'the camden buzzsaw' and fought against george foreman, matthew saad muhammad and evander holyfield among others.


 * I agree, Dwight Qawi should be included. Also, the great American haiku poet Nick Virgilio should be mentioned - reference http://www.nickvirgiliohaikuassociation.org/


 * What about Bruce Gorden president of NAACP graduated from Camden High 1964.


 * You should add Crystal Waters, singer to the list. She grew up in North Camden and attended Morgan Village Middle School. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Sallymarcal (talk • contribs) 19:54, 2 July 2008 (UTC)

Tone seems negative
The overall tone of the article seems rather negative which would violate WP:NPOV. FunkyChicken! 05:52, 3 June 2006 (UTC)


 * I live in Haddonfield, and trust me, the tone seems negative because that is the overall tone of the city's current state. To ignore that would be falsly presenting the city. Aufs klo 22:04, 12 November 2006 (UTC)


 * Dead on! Jersey John (talk) 09:54, 22 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Unfortunately, there is a lot to be negative about. --DThomsen8 (talk) 01:16, 11 November 2009 (UTC)


 * Camden used to be a great thriving city and in due time it will return to its status as one of the greatest cities in New Jersey. R.KennedyCFD

I heard that the Camden governmental structure was taken over by the Feds, due to rampant corruption. Is this true? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 108.23.105.146 (talk) 08:52, 21 December 2012 (UTC)

This looks accurate
It looks like a very accurate and neutral article to me... I cannot see anything that says otherwise.

66.50.230.85 21:47, 3 June 2006 (UTC)

Fictional characters
Is there a significant number of fictional characters from Camden? The only one that I am aware of is Dawnn Lewis' character Jaleesa Vinson from the TV series A Different World. 14:21, 18 October 2006 (UTC)

The Cooper River
Camden is over 15% water, not all of which is the Delaware, the Cooper River is also a significant (moreso in terms of recreation) river which runs through Camden. All along it's banks (and thorugh camden as well) there are parks, and the river is very popular for rowing and crew teams (the Camden County Boathouse is located in Camden along the Cooper). Perhaps it could be put into the georgaphy section, or maybe a small section could be added about the river in Camden? Aufs klo 22:22, 12 November 2006 (UTC)

Tragedy in Camden
Is it relevant to devote so much space to a sordid news item in a city article? Maybe it would sound better to put it in a different article (if any) (such as "Camden Tragedy of July 2005") and, perhaps, if needed, refer to it in the main Camden article. I'd suggest dropping this "tragedy" from this text. --Camcom 14:05, 18 November 2006 (UTC)

I agree….First, why pick just this tragedy,…not to sound frivolous…..but we are talking about Camden here, which has a tragedy everyday, why highlight one over the other. Second, you have already stated the crime statistics which is a tragedy in and of it-self. Get rid of the paragraph regarding the deaths of these three young boys.Shoessss 20:20, 20 November 2006 (UTC)


 * I agree that it should be a separate article if it is retained. In its current state, however, I wouldn't feel comfortable creating an article myself since there are no sources cited. I would rather see it developed with sources first to demonstrate notability. Accurizer 17:45, 22 November 2006 (UTC)

Fair use rationale for Image:Riversharks.JPG
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BetacommandBot (talk) 04:54, 18 February 2008 (UTC)

Ongoing vandalism by fraternity members
See Talk:Cooper University Hospital for information about persistent vandalism on another Camden-related article, presumably by the same person or persons who keep vandalizing Camden, New Jersey. It appears to be an ongoing campaign by members of the Tau Kappa Epsilon fraternity. Typical tactics involve inserting false allegations of gang violence in Camden or swapping existing photos for the same image of earthquake ruins, often with misleading edit summaries. Still more information is here and here. &mdash;Whoville (talk) 00:47, 25 June 2008 (UTC)


 * I've semi-protected this page for 3 months, per your request on WP:AN. Please let me know if the problems persist. -- The Anome (talk) 00:57, 25 June 2008 (UTC)

Translation into Chinese Wikipedia
The 22:10, 3 November 2008 Darkpharmer version of this article is translated into Chinese Wikipedia.--Wing (talk) 16:48, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Riverfront State Prison
This subsection under the section heading "Crime" needs updating.

In 2009, the State of NJ announced its decision to close the prison due to lowered inmate population statewide and at the Riverfront State Prison and because of the widely-held belief that such a valuable piece of property would provide greater value to the community if redeveloped.

Here is a link to one article on the subject:  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Davetskinner (talk • contribs) 17:09, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

Contradicting line
The Demographics section says this city is 50% non hispanic black and then says it is 42.82% Puerto Rican. This needs to be fixed. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 63.146.74.177 (talk) 18:36, 20 October 2010 (UTC)

Municipal Budget and Finance Info Needed
To Whom It May Concern; I enjoyed the Camden N.J. article/info page quite a bit. However, I would like to see some basic information on the Municipal budget rather than snippets and small pieces. Annual budget figures, total municipal government employment, average municipal pay rates, etc., could help readers make some reasonable comparisons with other cities in the country.

Thanks a bunch. 50.46.214.129 (talk) 21:48, 19 August 2012 (UTC)

Mistake; Vie
In the section 4.1 "Government" # "Local government", it says "Vie President"; does this mean "Vice President"?--Solomonfromfinland (talk) 06:27, 17 September 2012 (UTC)

Camden, USA
Quote from beginning of article: Although once a thriving center for manufacturing and industry, Camden is perhaps best known for its struggles with urban decay and political corruption.

Three Camden mayors have been jailed for corruption, the most recent being Milton Milan in 2000.[24] From 2005 to 2012, the school system and police department were operated by the state of New Jersey.

Camden public schools spent $23,770 per student ($19,118 on a budgetary per-pupil basis) in the 2009–10 school year[25] In 2012, the city's graduation rate fell to 49%, well below the state average of 86%.[26] and the national average of 93%.[27] In 2012, 3 out of 882 SAT test-takers were scored "college-ready", defined as a combined score of 1550 or higher on the three sections of the test, a standard met by 43% of students taking the exam nationwide.[28] Among residents, 40% are below the national poverty line.[29]

Camden had the highest crime rate in the United States in 2012, with 2,566 violent crimes for every 100,000 people,[30] which is 560% higher than the national average of 387 violent crimes per 100K citizens.[31]

Then going further down & reading about corruption, crime... What a sad article!

Welch eine Schande!

http://www.spiegel.de/fotostrecke/camilo-jose-vergara-tracking-time-in-braunschweig-fotostrecke-120145-9.html

--90.2.119.16 (talk) 07:27, 19 October 2014 (UTC)

Orphaned references in Camden, New Jersey
I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Camden, New Jersey's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "Committee": From Mendham Township, New Jersey: Mendham Township Committee, Mendham Township. Accessed January 20, 2015. From Waterford Township, New Jersey: Committee Members, Waterford Township. Accessed March 11, 2015. From Pennsauken Township, New Jersey: Township Committee, Pennsauken Township. Accessed July 8, 2014. 

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT ⚡ 06:45, 15 March 2015 (UTC)

Civil unrest and crime
User:Patrug restored some text regarding the riot of September 1969. While it may be important to put this event on the page, there are two issues with its current implementation:

1) It is definitely not neutral. "Camden experienced a fatal anti-police riot in September 1969." The word "fatal" and the phrase "anti-police" put flags up for me. If it is a direct quote, then fine, but it needs to have quotation marks if it is.

2) Why is this information preceding a paragraph about the Riots of 1971? There is a two-year gap here. The riot of 1969 should have its own bullet point above the Riots of 1971. Each point in the heading Civil unrest and Crime is chronologically ordered. I also fail to see the relationship between the two riots. If there is a relationship, it should be stated at the end of the new paragraph for the riot of September 1969.

We should definitely consider adding a paragraph for this topic. At the very least, we need to reword the sentence that exists.

Scary Ghosty (talk) 22:08, 30 November 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the note. I'm impressed with your work for this Rutgers course, and I agree with a couple of your points above. Please consider, though:
 * According to the 1969 New York Times reference, the 1969 riot was triggered by reports of "police brutality", leading to "thrown bricks at police patrol cars cruising through the area", escalating until two people including a police officer were killed by an unknown shooter. Feel free to rewrite or expand my summary sentence in the article – but what's "not neutral" about accurately calling this a fatal anti-police riot?
 * According to the 2007 Courier-Times reference, the riots of 1969 and 1971 "deepened Camden's divisions", in the context of "cities that had seen manufacturing shut down and middle-class white families flee to suburbs". What's wrong with Wikipedia following the Courier-Times by describing the riots as an important pair of similar events speeding Camden's decline just two years apart?
 * According to the 1973 New York Times reference, the "Camden 28" break-in occurred on August 21, 1971. Wouldn't it be helpful for Wikipedians to realize this was during the 1971 riot?
 * According to a local historian's 2011 introduction to the Courier-Times article, "The two riots were the worst events to hit the city of Camden until crack cocaine hit the streets in 1985–1986. The Riot of 1969 fatally weakened Camden. The Riot of 1971 mortally wounded Camden. Crack cocaine was the coup de grace." Given the subsequent middle-class flight that decimated the city's economy, wouldn't it be misleading for Wikipedia to present the riots as isolated & disconnected events?
 * According to Wikipedia:Prose versus lists, "Prose is preferred in articles, as prose allows the presentation of detail and clarification of context, in a way that a simple list may not. Prose flows, like one person speaking to another. It is best suited to articles, because their purpose is to explain. In an article, significant items should normally be mentioned naturally within the text rather than merely listed."
 * So, I agree with you that the current version of the "Civil unrest and crime" section reads awkwardly. I think the better solution is not to describe the events more disconnectedly, but rather to do the opposite, rewriting the bulletpoints into a couple of true paragraphs of coherent prose explaining these events in fuller context and perspective. Want to give it a try? —Patrug (talk) 01:05, 1 December 2016 (UTC)


 * I agree that the events probably shouldn't be listed, rather they should be gone through sequentially to better show their relationships.


 * I'm still not sure how I feel about the word "fatal" or how I feel about the relationship between the two riots. I concede that they have a relationship to the extent that they both contributed to the decline of Camden, but I'm still not sure that makes them actually connected. Falling population numbers and slowing industry also contributed to the decline of Camden, but I wouldn't necessarily say that they are directly related to the riot of 1969.


 * I'd be happy to change the page to reflect our discussion, specifically regarding the bulletpoint list. I still sort of disagree about the riot of 1969, but I take your points. Before I change anything regarding it, I'd like to do some research and see what I can find. Scary Ghosty (talk) 14:30, 5 December 2016 (UTC)

Crime Statistics
It appears that the crime rate box in the main "Crime" section is showing volume, not rate. The listed source is Table 8 of the FBI CIUS, but this table shows "offenses known to law enforcement" - aka total number of offenses.

To convert to crime rate, each of these volumes would need to be divided by 0.78980 (listed population of Camden / 100,00). So for instance, the murder rate would be 34÷0.7898 = 43.05 murders per 100,000 residents.

199.193.145.98 (talk) 01:51, 12 January 2017 (UTC)

New York Times on Camden policing
This New York Times article might be useful as a reference: https://www.nytimes.com/2017/04/02/nyregion/camden-nj-police-shootings.html Eastmain (talk • contribs) 03:05, 3 April 2017 (UTC)

Misleading on Crime
The top of the article clearly tries to cvorrelate the abolition of police with the decrease of crime, but fails to include that they still have police. The state and neighboring districts had to import their own to police the city after the abolition of policing.Wordbearer88 (talk) 03:45, 14 July 2020 (UTC)

"Camden Township, New Jersey" listed at Redirects for discussion
An editor has identified a potential problem with the redirect Camden Township, New Jersey and has thus listed it for discussion. This discussion will occur at Redirects for discussion/Log/2022 August 16 until a consensus is reached, and readers of this page are welcome to contribute to the discussion. TartarTorte 20:48, 16 August 2022 (UTC)

New & old buildings
Camden, New Jersey is located on the Delaware River in the Delaware Valley/Philadelphia metropolitan area in the US. At 380 ft, a tower of the Benjamin Franklin Bridge is the tallest structure in the city. Camden City Hall, at 370 ft, has been the tallest building in the city since 1931. Several buildings of the Victor Talking Machine Company (which became part of RCA Victor in 1929) dot the city's skyline, which also includes late 20th century residential high-rises. Proposals to build two towers of 590 ft and 450 ft on the waterfront were unveiled in September 2015.

In May 2013 the New Jersey Economic Development Authority announced that it would seek developers for the site of the demolished Riverfront State Prison just north of the Central Waterfront and the Benjamin Franklin Bridge in Cooper Point. In September 2013 Waterfront Renaissance Associates announced that it proposed to a develop a 2.3-million-square-foot commercial complex on 16 acre called the Riverfront World Trade Center. The project would be built in four phases, the first of which would be a promenade along the Delaware River.The plan calls for two 22-story and two 18-story buildings.

In October 2013, Herschend Family Entertainment announced they would add an attraction adjacent to the Adventure Aquarium, a 300 ft, 25-story observation tower ride with a moored balloon and gondola that would carry passengers above the site offering views of city, the Delaware River and the Philadelphia skyline to be built by Skyview Tower Systems. The 300 ft Skyview Tower, a combination gyro tower and moored balloon, in the city's entertainment district on the Camden Waterfront was expected to open in 2015. The structure is three rod towers joined at intervals by circular hoops Propelled by a winch, lightweight carriage disguised within the balloon envelope ascends the tower. The gondola beneath the balloon acts as floating circular walkway for a maximum of 40 passengers.

In September 2015, Liberty Property Trust unveiled a proposal to build two towers, one 590 ft tall and another 450 ft as part a master plan on the waterfront designed by Robert A. M. Stern. Called Camden Towers it all include an 18-story building the waterfront. Construction began in 2017.

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