Talk:Camille Cosby/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 17:12, 18 December 2020 (UTC)

As a way to relieve the GAN backlog, I will be reviewing this article.  Gerald WL  17:12, 18 December 2020 (UTC)

Career

 * "In June 1987, Johnetta Cole of Howard University in Washington, D.C., presented Cosby with a Doctor of Humane Letters, an honorary doctoral degree." Should this be placed at the education section, since it's not really a career?  Gerald WL  16:52, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅. That makes sense! The information has been moved to the education section. --Kbabej (talk) 19:43, 20 December 2020 (UTC)


 * "In 2014, she wrote the foreword for The Man from Essence: Creating a Magazine for Black Women, a book by Edward Lewis of Essence." Since there is a statement before saying she wrote a foreword for another book, I suggest rewording this sentence to "In 2014, she wrote a foreword for another book, titled"-- blablabla you get it.  Gerald WL  16:52, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅. Yes, that was repetitive. It's been reworded. --Kbabej (talk) 19:47, 20 December 2020 (UTC)


 * "The book was originally intended to be the subject of her thesis for her doctoral degree." ♩ Citation needed... na-na-na-na-na....  Gerald WL  16:52, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅. A source has been added. --Kbabej (talk) 20:48, 20 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Same for "At the Black Reel Awards of 2000, Cosby was nominated for a Black Reel Award for Outstanding Television Movie or Limited Series for the film along with Jeffrey Grant."  Gerald WL  16:52, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅. I actually cannot find one for the Black Reel Awards, so I removed the line. --Kbabej (talk) 20:54, 20 December 2020 (UTC)

Overall
Did a check, this seems to have the GA criteria. Congrats!  Gerald WL  05:04, 21 December 2020 (UTC)