Talk:Camp Lohikan

please do not delete this article. i just need some time to work on it i was trying to get thing ready to write and ready the table, i am going to putting in more details and make it sound lees like a ad.

Shouldn't we make this look less like an ad now? What's the wait for? If you can't say something without it being an ad, don't put it in. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.90.181.2 (talk) 20:03, 27 April 2009 (UTC)

Validity of this article
I don't mind this article being here but clearly some changes need to be made. I'm surprised it's still here to be honest.

This page needs attention
This page needs attention, and I'm unsure of what tags, if any, should be applied.

Issues:
 * The page is written like an advertisement.
 * The formatting is in need of some work.
 * The preamble of the page is simply identical to the first paragraph of the history section.
 * Very few references are given in the "History" section ... Which is the only section.

I know Wikipedia is a "fix it yourself" kind of place, but ... This probably should be deleted, and I've never tried to nominate a page for deletion before. -- SnoFox(t&#124;c) 03:10, 13 March 2014 (UTC)

-Also, there's no mention of the Freddy Brookins (Brookens?) controversy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.96.105.16 (talk) 21:07, 30 March 2015 (UTC)