Talk:Camp Ondessonk

Tone, length
Hi, I tagged this article anew for tone and length. It is written like an advertisement, liberally sprinkled with adjectives such as "rustic" and heartwarming descriptions of the type of work done there. It is over 50KB in length, which is beyond the prescription for WP:SPLIT (not that we should split this, but pare it down to something single-article-sized.) Elizium23 (talk) 23:04, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * It's not over 50kB, which is what the 50kB in WP:SPLIT is about. That being said, an article can be too long regardless. This one has quite a few bulleted lists that don't contribute to readable prose size but make it long nevertheless. I don't have a strong opinion either way. – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 08:39, 4 April 2020 (UTC)