Talk:Camp Tawonga

Comment on political content
IZAK, I removed the part at the end of the intro saying "pro-Israel." I think that is irrelevant and possibly even misleading. Tawonga is a summer camp, not a political organization, and its stance on the Israeli-Palestinian conflict has nothing to do with what it is about. Being a Jewish camp, do virtually all of those involved in it believe in the existence of Israel? Of course, I am sure. But the term "pro-Israel" can be taken to mean that the entity in question aggresively advocates for the Israeli side in the conflict which could not be said about Tawonga...by hosting the Israeli-Palestinian dialogue weekend, the camp is, if anything, more "pro-coexistence" than simply "pro-Israel." DanyaRomulus 21:41, 22 May 2006 (UTC)

Comment on article style
This article really reads like a reproduction of promotional material for Camp Tawonga and nothing else. I don't see in what sense it can be said to be an "article." The fact that the pro-Israel information was deleted, regardless of how that information might be interpreted by readers, only further suggests that the article is written to promote Camp Tawonga, rather than report on it from an outside, neutral, third party perspective. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.83.239.225 (talk) 08:44, 3 September 2010 (UTC)
 * Thats stating the obvious. I will attempt to trim back the article to the basic facts from the org itself, and will try to add at least 1 secondary source.Mercurywoodrose (talk) 17:42, 4 July 2013 (UTC)

External links modified
Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified 1 one external link on Camp Tawonga. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20160304104355/http://elearning.huc.edu/jhvrc/int_res_card.php?article=292 to http://elearning.huc.edu/jhvrc/int_res_card.php?article=292

When you have finished reviewing my changes, please set the checked parameter below to true or failed to let others know (documentation at ).

Cheers.— InternetArchiveBot  (Report bug) 17:20, 13 November 2016 (UTC)

External links modified
Hello fellow Wikipedians,

I have just modified 3 external links on Camp Tawonga. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:
 * Added archive https://archive.is/20130704182037/http://www.quixnet.net/news/read/category/Ap%20Top%20News/article/ap-counselor_killed_children_ok_in_camp_acc-ap to http://www.quixnet.net/news/read/category/Ap%20Top%20News/article/ap-counselor_killed_children_ok_in_camp_acc-ap
 * Added archive https://archive.is/20130704180817/http://www.keshetonline.org/event/camp-tawonga-keshet-lgbtq-family-camp/ to http://www.keshetonline.org/event/camp-tawonga-keshet-lgbtq-family-camp/
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20130713050241/http://www.tawonga.org/all-about/tawonga-legacy.php to http://www.tawonga.org/all-about/tawonga-legacy.php

When you have finished reviewing my changes, you may follow the instructions on the template below to fix any issues with the URLs.

Cheers.— InternetArchiveBot  (Report bug) 19:03, 8 January 2018 (UTC)