Talk:Campus privacy officer

Campus Privacy Officer review:

Lead section: 1. Great job! I would suggest no changes to this section. I think it gives a well-rounded overview. History: 1. Is there a link to Jennifer Garret Glasgow? Otherwise, I think this gives a great brief overview of how campus privacy officers came about. Responsibilities: 1. The overview on creating privacy education gives a good overview of the ethics of education, but maybe giving a brief example of one within this section might create a better lead in to the next sections on drafting and ensuring ethics within privacy education. 2. Make sure to insert a space for this sentence: “For example, the Health Insurance Portability and Accountability Act and (add space here) Family Educational Rights and Privacy Act both impact how student data is handled on campuses.” 3. Revise this sentence: “For examples, technologies, like learning analytics, collective student learning and instructor teaching data to analyze the effectiveness of teaching strategies.” 4. Make sure to fill out the section on examples of policy issues. 5. Why does mass collection of student data leave the student extremely vulnerable? - a little bit more information on how student’s information is used might give greater insight to this section. Laws that Campus Privacy Officers must track (should this all be capitalized?/ this might be a lengthy title, consider shortening it to CPO Legality Concerns - or something along those lines): 1. Consider giving a brief overview sentence underneath International Laws, ignorer to create a good transition for the rest of the laws. 2. Add a hyperlink to European Union (EU). 3. Make sure to put the abbreviation for GDPR right after you state the full name of the regulation at the beginning of the section. 4. What is a DPO? Make sure to write out the full name of the thing you are wiring about before using the abbreviation. Also would be helpful to add a hyperlink here if available. 5. Hyperlink to Family Policy Compliance Office if available. 6. Possibly add a little more information to the HIPAA act section, this could be expanded on by talking about a real life example on campus potentially. Organizations that Aid Campus Privacy Officers 1. Revise this sentence: “Educase’s current mission is to help provide privacy professionals with the resources and training they need to be successful in their roles” 2. Possible hyperlink to Higher Education Information Security Council (HEISC) if available. Role of CPO in Different Countries: 1. Add a hyperlink to The Protection of Personal Information Act (POPIA) if available. 2. This section could be added to, since only two countries are listed, however, it might be beneficial to leave this open for people who speak the languages of the country to add to this section. Examples of Campus Privacy Officers: 1. Great Job! I love the chart, it gives a very helpful guideline of campus privacy officers and their affiliations for people to find. References: 1. Make sure to go over the formatting of the footnotes in red, these could have available information added to them. Breadyornot (talk) 21:03, 16 November 2018 (UTC)Breadyornot