Talk:Can't Stop Won't Stop (Usher song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 18:34, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * The "length" section needs a duration template
 * Although not a requirement, ✅  Statυs (talk) 20:44, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * Link interpolation
 * Billy Joe's song is a single, change accordingly
 * Too many instances with "the song", change it up
 * ✅  Statυs (talk) 20:44, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Background
 * ""Can't Stop Won't Stop contains portion from the song "Uptown Girl" which was written and sang by Billy Joel (pictured)." ---> ""Can't Stop Won't Stop contains a portion from the single "Uptown Girl" which was composed and recording by Billy Joel (pictured)."
 * "In 2009 interview with People Magazine," ---> "In a 2009 interview with People magazine,". Also when was the interview?
 * "Usher, whose private life has been highly documented after filing a divorce from wife Tameka Foster, " ---> irrelevant to the song.
 * "In March, 2010," ---> remove first coma
 * "Upon its release, Raymond v. Raymond received generally mixed reviews from music critics, who were ambivalent towards its songwriting and themes" > another irrelevant sentence.
 * Remove the entire paragraph that follows, irrelevant.
 * "Adams has previously written and produced Usher's 2010 single "OMG"" ---> needs past-tense tone
 * No need for Billy Joel's album
 * Link mixed
 * ✅ things that needed to be fixed.  Statυs (talk) 20:44, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Composition
 * ""Can't Stop Won't Stop" is eurodance and dance-pop song that incorporates dubstep elements with a length of three minutes and 51 seconds" ---> "is a eurodance"


 * There needs to be a period before FN#16


 * No need for Usher's album Confessions and Nothing but the Beat
 * ❌ Why?  Statυs (talk) 20:51, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Please point to a GA or FA article that has this? Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  15:03, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Watch n' Learn maybe? —  Tomica    (talk)  15:22, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks, that will do. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  15:28, 10 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Synth is linked but what about hook?
 * ✅  Statυs (talk) 20:51, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * I noticed that some of the descriptions directly derived from the reviews. Unless they are in quotations, it needs to be restated in your own words. Otherwise, it's plagiarism.
 * See Hahc's comment below.  Statυs (talk) 20:51, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Reviews
 * "Erika Ramirez of Billboard" ---> Billboard
 * ✅  Statυs (talk) 20:51, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * "Billy Joel's songs" ---> according to source it was only one of his songs so why does the sentence gives the feeling that it was more than one?
 * ✅  Statυs (talk) 20:51, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Again many of the reviews are not in your own words.
 * Just to step in this. What "are not in your own words"? Mean. The reviews can be as either quoted or paraphrased. I red the section and this is not an issue at all. Please elaborate. Thanks. — Hahc 21  20:40, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Personnel
 * Delink cities and states
 * ❌ Why?  Statυs (talk) 20:44, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
 * He's right. You should delink 'em, 'thems the Wiki rules. :) --Khanassassin ☪ 15:00, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
 * —  Tomica    (talk)  15:22, 10 July 2012 (UTC)

"The next week, the song sold additional 3,593 copies and felt to number 78" > remove "additional" and change "felt" to "fell".
 * Charts
 * "debuted at the singles chart in South Korea." ---> "debuted on the singles chart in South Korea"
 * ✅  Statυs (talk) 20:44, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * References
 * FN#2, FN#8 change to iTunes Store
 * ❌ It appears to already say iTunes Store.  Statυs (talk) 20:51, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#13, FN#14 publisherid?
 * No it says ITunes Store. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  15:03, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * —  Tomica    (talk)  15:22, 10 July 2012 (UTC)
 * ❌ Not a requirement.  Statυs (talk) 20:51, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#24 author?
 * Trent is the author.  Statυs (talk) 20:51, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#26 The A.V. Club does not need to be italicize
 * ❌ It is a print source, so it does.  Statυs (talk) 20:51, 7 July 2012 (UTC)


 * FN#27 delink Korean language
 * ❌ Why?  Statυs (talk) 20:51, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Similar to states and cities, languages don't have to be linked at all. :) --Khanassassin ☪ 15:00, 8 July 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅, but I don't agree delinking states and cities.  Statυs (talk) 21:11, 8 July 2012 (UTC)

Putting article on hold until comments are addressed. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  20:05, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Passing articles great job you two. Best, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  16:34, 12 July 2012 (UTC)