Talk:Can You Hear Me? (Doctors)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 17:44, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Archive all archivable sources. ✅ – DarkGlow ( ✉ ) 21:33, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Remove or paraphrase the entire quote in production per MOS:QUOTE. ✅ – DarkGlow ( ✉ ) 20:25, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Use the cast listing template in #Cast_and_characters. ✅ – DarkGlow ( ✉ ) 18:41, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Archive the newly-added reference from Metro.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:08, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Remove the link to "List of Doctors episodes" per the episode template. ✅ – DarkGlow ( ✉ ) 18:41, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
 * The following episode, "Up the Wall", doesn't need a reference.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 22:48, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

 * Plot section doesn't need a reference per MOS:TVPLOT.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 22:48, 15 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Everything else in these two sections looks good.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 22:48, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * The 3rd and 4th paragraphs in this section have only one reference, which links to an official website that doesn't cover anything from either paragraph. There are only two options here: (1) Remove the content or (2) add references from where the content is provided.
 * Here's one of, if not the main reference.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:02, 15 January 2021 (UTC)


 * This is a very large section, so it should be reworded and divided into unique subsections, such as "Development", "Writing", and "Filming".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:15, 15 January 2021 (UTC)


 * The quote between "Lloyd stated that the cast enjoyed filming the episode" and "and that they were pleased" is unnecessary, so it should be removed.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:04, 15 January 2021 (UTC)


 * "Doctors take an annual transmission break during the summer to accommodate the BBC's coverage of sport ceremonies and other daytime dramas, which typically starts in late June, but due to production on set being suspended, the transmission break began after the episode aired on 12 June 2020." --> "Due to production on set being suspended, the annual transmission break taken by Doctors during the summer began later than scheduled after the episode aired on 12 June 2020."
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:13, 15 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Italicize the use of the show Doctors. ✅ – DarkGlow ( ✉ ) 23:18, 15 January 2021 (UTC)
 * Move the sentence "The Doctors Twitter account shared a photograph of cast member Elisabeth Dermot Walsh holding a clapperboard stating that her scenes in the episode had been filmed using an iPhone X" to the filming subsection.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:30, 15 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove "I'm incredibly proud of the work everyone has put into this episode, especially our brilliant cast who have had to learn new skills, while still giving outstanding performances" as it's unnecessary and the quote is already too long.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:32, 15 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Additionally, there's a lot of filming information that is found in #Development, so I'm going to put this review on hold, and give you two a maximum of a week to fix #Production. ✅ – DarkGlow ( ✉ ) 23:37, 15 January 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * To not end the article on a run-on-sentence, I would remove the rest of the sentence following "ITU doctors and nurses are facing", so the article ends with the sentence: "An ITU nurse said that the episode was well written, and that it accurately portrayed the pressures and struggles that the ITU doctors and nurses are facing worldwide."
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 22:55, 15 January 2021 (UTC)