Talk:Canadian Headstones

March 2011
[Note: user Clarksonon was adding WikiProject banner] --Clarksonon (talk) 13:59, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

Trying to Clarify after edit
I feel that the amount of information that was removed in the edit of the first few paragraphs now leaves this article very vague. The "the" in the first sentence makes no sense with the rest of the sentence removed. Am I allowed to put something back in? How can I rewrite it from the following so that it does not sound like advertising?

Any suggestions would be very welcome. Clarksonon (talk) 01:24, 10 March 2011 (UTC)(talk) 00:32, 10 March 2011 (UTC)


 * It sounds like an ad and alot is not about the company its self by y companies  are doing this in general - Just state the facts that can be references about the company.  Would be better to talk about the history "How" it got to were it is today not y it was formed - as many others have done - its not specific -  its filler. How many editors are registered - were does the finding come from - is there editorial control? -  talk about those  kinds of things. Moxy (talk) 03:11, 10 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks so much. That is a big help. I will get going on that. Should I put my ideas here in the talk area to be looked at before I edit the article? Clarksonon (talk) 13:59, 10 March 2011 (UTC)


 * how does this sound? I have redone the first paragraph & made a few small changes to the other paragraphs

thanks Clarksonon (talk) 15:23, 11 March 2011 (UTC)

a totally new rewrite
i have added to the first paragraph & fleshed out the history section.

Clarksonon (talk) 01:43, 12 March 2011 (UTC)