Talk:Canberra Roller Derby League/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sp33dyphil (talk · contribs) 07:55, 14 October 2011 (UTC)


 * What are "bouts"? Sorry for my ignorance, but I'm afraid this may not be everyday language.
 * ✅ The word "bout" is used for a match in fighting sports like fencing, boxing and roller derby. Linked to the wiktionary.
 * Any reason why "Fresh Meat" and "Boot Camp" are so named?
 * Not aside from the obvious. Roller Derby terms, inherited from the leagues in the US.
 * " in the Australian Capital Territory (ACT)." From then on, please use the acronym, or "Territory", instead of full name.
 * ✅. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:25, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "Bullseye Betty" is that the real name? If not, please use the real name at first mention.
 * ✅. No one uses their real name in Roller Derby. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:25, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Please include full name of "Dr Hell" at first mention.
 * ✅ Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:25, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "at Southern Cross Stadium, Tuggeranong, before" notice the comma. From now on, please refer to the stadium and not include "Tuggeranong" as the reader already knows where it is.
 * "The Front Gallery and Cafe" Is that one proper noun, or should "Cafe" be de-capped? Same with "Tattoo Artist North Lyneham"
 * ✅. Yes, both are proper nouns. But it should have been Cafe and Halley" not "Gallery and Cafe". Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:25, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Please please or  in or around dates to keep them together.
 * ✅, but Good Articles do not require strict MOS conformance. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:25, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "Adelaide Roller Derby.." double periods.
 * ✅. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:25, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Please wikify "Wollongong", "indie rock" and "Tuggeranong".
 * ✅ . Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:25, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "The team had seven new skaters in 2011. The 2011 team was captained by Dr. Hell. The squad's 2011 vice captains were Annethrax and Rainbow Spite." --> "Seven new skaters joined the 2011 squad, which was captained by Dr. Hell; the squad vice captains were Annethrax and Rainbow Spite."
 * ✅. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:40, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm not sure "The season featured three bouts, including the finale. The second bout sold out within days." --> "Including the finale, the season featured three bouts, the second of which were sold out within days."
 * ✅. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:40, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "A$10.00" are those two zeroes necessary?
 * ✅. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:40, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "intake of around more than 90 plus skater"
 * ✅. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:58, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Why is "Season" capitalised?
 * ✅. No idea. Fixed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:40, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * "had four hundred women sign up." Shouldn't it be signing up?
 * ✅. Re-worded. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:40, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Please add alt text. I know it's not a GA requirement, but it's for the good of some people. If nobody wants to do it, then I'll do it myself.
 * ✅. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:50, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Checklinks indicates one dead link.
 * ✅. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:42, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Please de-capitalise "magazine" if it's not part of a name.
 * Could not find an instance of this. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:40, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Could not find an instance of this. Hawkeye7 (talk) 09:40, 14 October 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * End note
 * Great article, very happy to review and promote. Hope it can go one step better ;) Sp33dyphil © • © 00:35, 15 October 2011 (UTC)