Talk:Candy Shop (Madonna song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:43, 29 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead
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 * and Pharrell Williams while production → comma before "while"
 * carried out Madonna and Williams' production team → carried out by the singer and the latter's team
 * July 2007 but was quickly → comma before "but"
 * Link "pop" to pop music
 * and R&B and the instrumentation of → and R&B, with its instrumentation consisting of
 * Link "music critics" to music journalism
 * and catchiness but → comma before "but"
 * was certified platinum → was certified Platinum
 * top-twenty → top 20

Infobox

 * flawless ;)

Background and composition
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 * online but was quickly → comma before "but"
 * song Madonna and Pharrell Williams worked → no full names here
 * Williams recalled, "we → The latter recalled, "we
 * songs; "I love → songs, "I love
 * Link "pop" to pop music
 * lyrically the song uses → the song lyrically uses
 * Madonna sings "Come → comma after "sings"
 * The lines "My sugar → comma after "lines"

Reception
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 * Link "music critics" to music journalism
 * Allmusic → AllMusic
 * praised its catchiness; "set to a → ; to ,
 * Slant Magazine wrote: "Pharrell → : to ,
 * Talia Soghomolian, from musicOMH, was → no comma
 * review; "A couple → normal comma
 * Helen Brown, from The Daily Telegraph, compared → no comma
 * from Blender, called it a → no comma here
 * certified platinum → certified Platinum

Live performances
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 * were recorded and released in Madonna's → "in" to "on"
 * for party inspired → for party-inspired
 * in Golden Twenties inspired → in Golden Twenties-inspired
 * it on tour; "[her] obvious → ; to ,

Credits and personnel
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 * Unlink Madonna here

Charts and certifications

 * flawless ;)

Copy-violation

 * 35.5% is acceptable!

Links

 * No problems here!

Outcome

 * for 7 days! Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:56, 30 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:39, 31 December 2016 (UTC)