Talk:Canis Minor/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 09:59, 10 October 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * "and it is commonly represented as one of the dogs following the constellation of Orion the hunter." - so there are more than two dogs?
 * "In Bayer's Uranometria, Procyon on the dog's belly, and Gomeisa its neck.[10]" - uhmm...
 * "however his star 12 Canis Minoris was not found not to exist .[9]" - sounds better and is more logical. Perhaps add "to date" at the end.
 * See also a colourful, large table and a very small lead. Not sure we need the hatnote linking to Canis Minor (Chinese astronomy).--Tomcat (7) 12:17, 18 October 2012 (UTC)


 * ok, did the first three and buffed the lead. Not sure what you meant about the table...all the constellation articles have those infoboxes at the bottom.....? Casliber (talk · contribs) 12:53, 18 October 2012 (UTC)
 * I was referring to the Canis Minor (Chinese astronomy) article. Regards.--Tomcat (7) 20:04, 18 October 2012 (UTC)
 * aah ok. Casliber (talk · contribs) 05:03, 19 October 2012 (UTC)