Talk:Cantonese as a Heritage Language in Toronto

Your article looks great, it has great in depth detailed about the three parts of language vitality and it is very well organized. Those pictures added really attracts attention. If there is a suggestion I have to make is maybe to add a little History section, Just a little. I know there is Historical information in your article, so maybe make a section only for History. Therefore, it will be easier for the readers to get the information they want. Overall, I think this article looks amazing, you have citation in place and statistic to back up ypu statement. Awesome Work!!! Zhan2319 (talk) 14:10, 27 February 2016 (UTC) I'm not sure who gave that feedback above. Naomi's begins here:

Really nice looking page -- well-organized and well-illustrated.

You might want to give some explanation of what you mean by "the other detailed language" in the section on demographics, perhaps referring back to the Census definitions page.

Check verb tenses when reporting historical events. Naomi TBB199 (talk) 19:01, 11 February 2016 (UTC)

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Thanks for the input so far, I believe the first comment was a member of Shelley's group.

I have already fixed the verb tense in the Status paragraph & also provided a short definition for "the other detailed language" section in demographics

Serenawsli (talk) 12:48, 13 February 2016 (UTC)

--- Hi! This is Helen from Shelley's group: This is a very nice and professional looking article! Very detailed data and statistics given with proper citations!For all sections:) Just a little suggestion that may help to improve your article: For the institutional support, I can see how you have the language schools and Cantonese speaking churches as examples and explains the reasons for them, and I think it is already very nice so far! But if you want to make your article more detailed, maybe consider having some bold text as specific organizations/institutions that provides language supports which can help the readers who wants to have more information on this section! Also I was looking at the Filipino articles and the members had the Toronto Public Library as one of the institutional supports, which this is a really neat idea for all of our language supports! So take this as a consideration ;) Really nice work again! Keep improving on the sentence structures for easy comprehensions. KeLu0829 (talk) 00:16, 29 February 2016 (UTC)