Talk:Capital punishment in Pennsylvania

encyclopedic-ness
This article needs to take on a more encyclopedic tone. For instance, stating that the death penalty "costs a lot of money" could be much more concrete. There a number of elements here that could be a bit more specific. PurpleChez (talk) 19:04, 26 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Does it look better now? Anything else you think needs improvement? --David Tornheim (talk) 15:02, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Much! Kudos!PurpleChez (talk) 17:29, 21 May 2020 (UTC)