Talk:Captain Future (magazine)/GA1

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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 19:01, 23 December 2014 (UTC)

Happy to offer some thoughts.

As ever, looks strong. Please check my changes- I've adjusted the table and added an image, among smaller tweaks. J Milburn (talk) 19:01, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * What precisely is a superscientist? Is it a very good scientist or a superhero who is also a scientist? (It's not in the OED.) I note that in the main prose, it is "super-scientist".
 * I think the intended meaning is a very good scientist, though the source doesn't explain and I haven't read the relevant stories. I added the hyphen in the lead; does that suffice? Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 23:10, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Technically, citations are needed for all quotes, even in the lead.
 * Done. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 23:10, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * "the disembodied brain of Simon Wright" Presumably, you don't mean disembodied- the brain would still be corporeal- detached, perhaps?
 * You're right, of course, but "disembodied" is what the source says. I assume they mean a brain in a vat, though perhaps not quite in the usual philosophical sense.  A quick bit of Googling finds this, which makes it definite.  I've just made it "brain", which sidesteps the issue; is there a better way to say it? Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 23:10, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Is Startling Comics worth linking? How about Better Publications?
 * I can't find a good target for the comic, which surprises me. I linked Better Publications to Standard Magazines, which was the parent corporation. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 23:10, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Your Superman link goes to an article on the character, not a particular publication
 * That's the best link I could find. Apparently Weisinger didn't leave to edit a particular comic; he left to edit the group of Superman comics, and I don't think there's a suitable link for that. Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 23:10, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * I notice from the covers that the tagline changed- is this mentioned in any of your sources?
 * No, but I just searched and found something that will work. Probably have to be tomorrow to make the edit; I'm out of time for tonight.  Thanks for the review, as usual! Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 23:10, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * OK, done. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 03:36, 24 December 2014 (UTC)
 * My only concern with the changes is the use of the volume/issue number to refer to the magazine's individual issues, both in the image caption and the table. It's not that it's wrong, it's just that it's never done that way -- nobody knows the volume/issue numbers for most magazines; it's just bibliographic data you look up when you need it.  Everyone uses the cover date to identify the magazines.  Is there a way to make the table correctly sortable while using the magazine dates as the visible text? Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 03:50, 24 December 2014 (UTC)
 * Understood- I've adjusted this. J Milburn (talk) 17:14, 24 December 2014 (UTC)

According to page 55 of this book, Captain Future was "the first science fiction pulp built around the exploits of a single character". J Milburn (talk) 19:13, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
 * It's not just the first one, it's really the only one. I added a footnote to say so; does that cover it? Mike Christie (talk - contribs -  library) 23:10, 23 December 2014 (UTC)