Talk:Capture of Afulah and Beisan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Droodkin (talk · contribs) 15:57, 6 September 2012 (UTC)

Will start reviewing the article soon, looks interesting. I ask for patience, no one needs to rush here. Keeping the WP:GA table on standby. --Droodkin (talk) 15:57, 6 September 2012 (UTC)

Update: Okay, there something I'd like clarifying.
 * The 2nd Lancer's quote in the Afulah section, was it suppose to stand on its own? I am aware that it is a quote but I believe it is rather abrupt to end the section with it. A quote box would do, or some background behind the quote (no quotations are present either).
 * Casualties? It is unusual for a military campaign article to not have a casualty list. Although it isn't mandatory, I'd recommend it. I understand if there is a lack of sources to cite a definitive figure.

--Droodkin (talk) 17:12, 6 September 2012 (UTC)