Talk:Capture of La Boisselle

Review
Easily B-class. If you try for GA or A class, please consider the following. Introduction paragraphs 2 and 3 are not about the 1916 battle, which I found a little confusing. I have no issue with the stuff below the introduction, which is well-written and packed with great information. Djmaschek (talk) 03:20, 20 October 2014 (UTC)


 * Thanks, the lead was a bit of a ramble and could do with a pruning and I added the 1914-1916 history of the area for continuity. I also found the description of the bloke in a brown suit irresitable. ;O)Keith-264 (talk) 07:32, 20 October 2014 (UTC)

The more I look for a definitive source for which village is Ovillers and which is Ovillers la Boisselle, the more confused I get. I might have got them the wrong way round.Keith-264 (talk) 12:26, 20 October 2014 (UTC)


 * Cut the Lead as suggested.Keith-264 (talk) 10:23, 27 January 2015 (UTC)