Talk:Carabus japonicus

Wiki Education assignment: Behavioral Ecology 2024
— Assignment last updated by NHanselman (talk) 13:35, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

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Alright, I think I fixed it. Is this what you had in mind? NHanselman (talk) 16:41, 9 April 2024 (UTC)
 * NHanselman, there's nothing else to do. Your hook has been approved. — Davest3r08 > : 3  (talk) 14:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)

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This page is overall very informative. You did a really good job. It’s very interesting to know the experiment that put a male and a female of different species in a box together. For some suggestions, I think you can move the life cycle section up a little, like between the diet and the behavior sections. For other structural improvements please refer to the beetle topic order document. Besides, if possible, I think you could add a little on the interaction of the beetles with human, as they predate on earthworms. Heater4 (talk) 01:02, 12 April 2024 (UTC)

I thought your article was very well written. I just thought it could use some minor grammatical changes where the writing felt a bit choppy. I combined the sentence when you were talking about body dimorphism and the body length between sexes. I also changed some tenses to keep them consistent throughout your writing. A suggestion I would give to you is to use more complex sentences to make your writing more interesting. However, your delivery and explanations were very clear and understandable. Kidsnextdoor954 (talk) 03:38, 12 April 2024 (UTC)KidsNextDoor954