Talk:Carel Victor Gerritsen/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:52, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * Can we link open government?
 * Linked.


 * No link for "Neo-Malthusian League"?
 * There is no article so I have added a redlink.


 * "in Amersfoort, the" link.
 * Done.


 * "Dutch Reformed Church" link?
 * Done.


 * Link Groningen.
 * Done.


 * "Although Gerritsen probably never" Although he probably...
 * Done.


 * "he was influenced by his ideas" -> "Gerritsen was influenced"
 * Done.


 * "named De Dageraad, in 1882." sentence is unref.
 * Added.


 * "Young Amsterdam" not notable enough for a link?
 * There is no article. Do you think I should add a redlink?
 * If you think it could host an article, then I have no problem at all with red links. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:57, 6 September 2021 (UTC)


 * "Gerritsen's wife Aletta Jacobs ..." normally use upright on this kind of image.
 * Amended.


 * Could link Legitimacy (family law).
 * Good idea. Wikilink added.


 * Ref 15 should be pp.
 * Fixed.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:21, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for this review. Please take a look at my amends and tell me if there is anything else. simongraham (talk) 07:46, 6 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Red link issue aside, happy to promote. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:57, 6 September 2021 (UTC)