Talk:Caresse Crosby/Archives/2016

Unencyclopedic tone
Pretty clearly the article has been heavily edited by one or more persons who don't much like Ms. Crosby. The tone is unencyclopedic and there is obvious bias against the subject's lifestyle; an example is the subheader "Flirtations, affairs, drugs and drinking" which I've removed. There may well be a WP:WEIGHT problem as well; anyway, I'm adding Template:Tone and hope editors familiar with the subject matter can improve it. --Middle 8 (t • c &#124; privacy • COI) 07:28, 4 January 2016 (UTC)


 * Thanks for removing that wild heading about her "flirtations". I don't know how that crept into the article. Thanks for your diligence. I've looked over the rest of it and the article appears to be free of other issues like that one, so I'm going to remove the Tone hatnote. — btphelps (talk to me) (what I've done) 19:46, 4 January 2016 (UTC)

Assessment comment
Substituted at 10:53, 29 April 2016 (UTC)