Talk:Cargomatic

Requested move 16 December 2019


Cargomatic (business) → Cargomatic – There is no reason for the disambiguation tag of (business) because there are no other pages on Wikipedia with the same name. Cargomatic is known throughout Trucking Software industry and can be identified by name only. Jakerubin (talk) 22:25, 16 December 2019 (UTC)


 * I already moved the page for you as per your request here. — HELL KNOWZ   ▎TALK 22:29, 16 December 2019 (UTC)

Tone
The article reads too promotional. Stuff like "has been competing in the crowdshipping arena for a number of years", "There are inherit benefits to maximizing", or "have formed a strategic alliance" should be rewritten to be more neutral. The quotations should be paraphrased. Stuff like "The app is available for download on iOS and Android." is basically an advertisement without context. — HELL KNOWZ   ▎TALK 10:03, 17 December 2019 (UTC)


 * I changed a lot of the content of the article there should no longer be any tone issues - also added the sections so the lead is clear - I believe these alerts can be removed TALK — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jakerubin (talk • contribs) 20:12, 17 December 2019 (UTC)