Talk:Carl Gunnarsson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 01:57, 5 June 2020 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  01:57, 5 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Link minor ice hockey. ✅
 * He probably had some stats worth mentioning from his junior hockey years. Maybe some awards?✅
 * Add the Maple Leafs header? ✅
 * "Leafs best defenceman" Apostrophe. ✅
 * "teams final home game" Again. ✅
 * "Gunnarsson was traded to the St. Louis Blues (along with a fourth-round draft pick in the 2014 NHL Entry Draft)" Maybe "Gunnarsson and a fourth-round draft pick..."? ✅
 * "20 games for the Bues" ✅
 * "he was playing on a defensive pairing with Kevin Shattenkirk and helping the Blues maintain a 16-4-2 home record." Changing "helping" to past tense sounds better. ✅
 * "In the first year of his newest contract," Not the newest contract by the time we read the last paragraph of the section. ✅
 * "although" WP:EDITORIAL. ✅
 * AGF on offline sources.

That should be it. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  07:32, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
 * , I believe I have addressed all of the issues. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 18:55, 5 June 2020 (UTC)