Talk:Carmella Cammeniti

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Edit Revision
I made a revision edit because I was the only one who was bothered to reference the article, and then it gets deleted. Someone is vandalising on purpose...

Article Improvement
I edited this article, and spent a lot of my time gathering sources and reference. The article did not meet the guidelines of wikipedia. It does now. Talk about this here. It could be deleted otherwise Raintheone (talk) 13:11, 18 August 2008 (UTC)

Ref number nine ("Natalie Blair speaks about her character") is either dead or it's gone walkabout. - JuneGloom    Talk  19:20, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

Marco
The story leaps forward in time too far... I'm missing a crucial bit where Marco is persuaded to stay after buying a one-way ticket out of town (or does he?) The ref doesn't have any online text for that part of the story line. I see he dies in a bush fire, but don't know where or when, so we don't know from the article whether he stayed or not, or where he went. -- Ohconfucius ¡digame! 04:33, 31 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Carmella convinced him to stay when he was about to go. He died in hospital after marrying Carmella on his death bed. Rain the 1  BAM 04:59, 31 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks. I think that the Relationships / Storyline sections of the article don't work. Between them, there is too much repetition whilst still leaving holes in the coverage. I'm going to remove the section on relationships and merge any relevant material into the 'storyline' section. -- Ohconfucius ¡digame! 05:02, 31 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Oh hmm, I just noticed. You removed the OOU info (Blairs comments, opinions) from the development sections. Which make it read like another storyline section. It needs the development sections because it won't pass GA without any OOU info. You could cut it from storylines instead I guess. Rain the 1  BAM 05:10, 31 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Apologies, I'm not familiar with the requirements with this sort of article. I'm just trying to make it more coherent reading, but if the GAN people have other preferences, then I'll stop the reorganisation until we can agree on the way forward. -- Ohconfucius ¡digame! 05:17, 31 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Well I need to get more sleep now, but later I'll pull up some of the layouts from the wikiprojects if they still have them. I know, I am a fan of the copy edit you made becuase it certainly makes more sense. I guess as all the articles follow the same layout defacto (is that the right word) for some reason.. I actually want to know why myself now. :p Rain the 1  BAM 05:22, 31 March 2011 (UTC)

Issues
I've done some heavy lifting, trying to move everything out of the storyline section:
 * I need help to further rearrange text so that everything that has so far been moved dovetails with the family-relationships section.
 * Then, a new heading for the relationships/family section may be desirable, but that is less urgent, and may fall into place once all the text is in the right order.


 * In general, there are a large number of non-sequiturs, most I daresay come from minor storylines with little importance to the character whilst mindful of WP:SUMMARY. I think we can remove many of them. Help needed there. Specific examples:
 * "In his book Super Aussie Soaps, Andrew Mercado brands Carmella, the mobster's daughter, as "the mafia princess"." – so what of it? this is a non-sequitur... is there any critical commentary to add?
 * Another non-sequitur is the lack of mention of Carmella's disappearance to become a nun. but we have mention of her mother sending Connor to look for her... -- Ohconfucius ¡digame! 10:16, 31 March 2011 (UTC)

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