Talk:Carmen Rodríguez (politician)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: FuzzyMagma (talk · contribs) 14:33, 20 September 2023 (UTC)

will review this FuzzyMagma (talk) 14:33, 20 September 2023 (UTC)

minor comments for improvement

 * wikilink "Quechisla" in the lead, if not available, redlink please both in the lead and the "Early life and education" section
 * I'm not certain that a town of less than fifty inhabitants meets notability guidelines; although, I could stand to be corrected on standards for populated places. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 22:21, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
 * according to Notability (geographic features), "Populated, legally recognized places are typically presumed to be notable, even if their population is very low." put I understand your concern as also in general, a red link should remain in an article if there is a reasonable expectation that the article in question will eventually be created (per WP:Redlink). FuzzyMagma (talk) 16:24, 29 September 2023 (UTC)


 * replace "during which time" with "where"
 * ✅ Krisgabwoosh (talk) 22:21, 28 September 2023 (UTC)


 * replace "and served as executive of Light" to "and was executive of Light"
 * ✅ Krisgabwoosh (talk) 22:21, 28 September 2023 (UTC)


 * gaining "prominence" in trade unionism, reword to remove WP:WTA
 * Changed out "gaining prominence" for "assuming positions". Krisgabwoosh (talk) 22:21, 28 September 2023 (UTC)


 * please change "after entering retirement" to "after retirement"
 * ✅ Krisgabwoosh (talk) 22:21, 28 September 2023 (UTC)


 * wikilink "parliamentary" to Plurinational Legislative Assembly or something similar
 * Not sure "parliamentary" naturally leads to that, per MOS:EASTEREGG. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 22:21, 28 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Her tenure saw Bolivia become the country with one of the highest pension coverages in the region, I wonder if you can rephrase this to "According to Marcelo Justoto, a XX at XX, her tenure saw Bolivia become the country with one of the highest pension coverages in the region" just to void encroaching on Wikivoice. Also I did a spot check and the refs does not state that
 * It does ("la cobertura previsional de Bolivia abarca a un 97% de su población") but let me rephrase it for neutrality. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 22:21, 28 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Aged 66 by the time her term expired was her age the reason for not being reelected? if not then please remove as irrelevant
 * ✅ Krisgabwoosh (talk) 22:21, 28 September 2023 (UTC)


 * redlink Félix García in the "Chamber of Deputies of Bolivia" template
 * ✅ Krisgabwoosh (talk) 22:21, 28 September 2023 (UTC)

Spot checks

 * Ref 2a: checks out
 * Ref 8: checks out
 * Ref 9: failed
 * See above. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 22:21, 28 September 2023 (UTC)

comment below this please FuzzyMagma (talk) 17:23, 20 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Will address these hopefully on the 28th. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 02:19, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Done now. Krisgabwoosh (talk) 22:21, 28 September 2023 (UTC)