Talk:Carole C. Noon

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Feedback on WGST 3991 article proposal
This is a good choice for the assignment. The proposal needs a bit more work to find sources that meet Identifying reliable sources. Since Noon is the founder of Save the Chimps, the organizational website would not be considered an unbiased source without some supporting references. One of the main sources for this article (the New York Times article) has already been used 11 times.

Here are a couple of suggestions for adding to the article: Include a "Published works" section, with a reference to her article published in Journal of Applied Animal Welfare Science and any other scholarly works you can find. Look for additional articles from newspapers/magazines with editorial oversight or recognizable names, like the New York Times Magazine and Air & Space (from the Smithsonian).

Images uploaded to Wikipedia have to meet Image use policy. This means they have to be public domain or fair use. There is already an image request on this article, which means that others have not been able to find something with those permissions.

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Peer Editing
- the inclusion of the sisters names does not seem quite relevant to the article.

-She then earned a master's in anthropology and a doctorate in biological anthropology, under Dr. Linda Wolfe from the University of Florida, specializing in captive chimpanzees." this is an awkward sentence, could maybe be spliced into two sentences and include more information upon the research question or topic of the chimpanzees.

- is the bushmeat trade in Africa a reference-able subject? can this be linked?

-"Acrus Foundation" can this be linked?

-"She worked tirelessly to improve their conditions" rephrase to remove subjective language (sounds bias) Sadonahue (talk) 16:59, 7 March 2018 (UTC)