Talk:Carolina Sandoval

Copy Editing
I began the process of copy editing this article, but it still requires cleanup, (especially cohesion) by a copy editor.TheHappiestCritic (talk) 03:25, 23 January 2012 (UTC)

I did some major copy editing, although the cohesion could still use a little work. It seems like a list of TV appearances, rather than an encyclopedic article. I think the grammar and structure are much better, though. I also linked a few articles back to this page. Tripnoted (talk) 05:02, 27 January 2012 (UTC)