Talk:Caroline Monnet

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Hello, I was assigned to do a peer review of your article for our film class. Your article is well written with plenty of information, but there is room for improvements. The suggestions that I would like to provide for your article are as follows: I think it would benefit your article to add more at the beginning, the purpose of this is to provide your reader with a quick snapshot of information regarding your filmmaker, enough to draw the reader in without giving away too much information. Secondly, I really like that you added a style heading in this article, it is something that I do not see all that often. However, this makes me curious as to what inspires her style of filmmaking. If you can find something that speaks to that information I believe it would greatly benefit this section. Finally, the third paragraph of your "Career" heading I believe could be partially used in the beginning as to add more flavor to the introduction. Please see my addition to this portion of your article attached. Signed, Deloros.ford94 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Deloros.ford94 (talk • contribs) 17:39, 31 October 2018 (UTC)

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Jjwalkman. Peer reviewers: Nosebleedy99, Deloros.ford94.

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Adriana's Peer Reveiw
There is a lot of useful and detailed information presented here, and translating it into the actual Wikipedia article was fluid and well written. That being said the actual lay out of the sandbox is a little menacing. It's all short bits of scattered and mixed information in a very long list that's very hard to read. Making headers, organising into smaller chunks, and making a lead section would be beneficial to organising and make it easier to read. Other that, great refences and great work!Nosebleedy99 (talk) 19:14, 27 October 2018 (UTC)

Hi, I will be doing a peer review of this article for our film class. The article could have categories added to it. Also a list of films and awards(if any) would help. If your education heading is that short perhaps it could either be included in background, or as a subheading of background.

More references are needed, or it is at risk of being removed by automated editors. The text could use some citations using those references. Have you looked into: Embargo project (2015) by Tailfeathers, Elle-Máijá; Hopkins, Zoe; Monnet, Caroline; Lozinski, Lori; Goulet, Danis; Arnaquq-Baril, Alethea; Chagnon, Catherine; Jackson, Lisa It is in the Carleton library.

Before I go I will link some of the words on your page. Have a nice day. — Preceding unsigned comment added by SaberToothCat (talk • contribs) 15:16, 5 November 2016 (UTC)