Talk:Carolyn Warmus

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Tone & Superfluous Language
I made one small change: "sits behind bars at" to "is incarcerated at" -- but that's only one of the smallest examples of the overblown, cute crime-drama tone/language dominating this article. I changed it because it's minor, but nonetheless exemplary, of an issue I wanted to run by others before spending time fixing the rest. Do others agree this article has an incorrect tone for an encyclopedia entry? I'm not a super experienced editor beyond typos but would like to take on more. RJ0053 (talk) 05:04, 2 August 2017 (UTC)

I agree, and did some editing myself. Feel free to add/delete..as they say, be bold! Beaglemix (talk) 20:16, 4 August 2017 (UTC)

Cool, will do! Appreciate the encouragement. I have a feeling this article is going to get a lot of attention today with CNN running a special on her case as I write this, so we'll see what else happens on the editing front. — Preceding unsigned comment added by RJ0053 (talk • contribs) 02:23, 5 August 2017 (UTC)

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Carolyn Warmus
All references to the Scarsdale school district or school board should be changed to The Edgemont School District and School Board. Greenville School is in the Edgemont School District not the Scarsdale School District. 24.186.177.74 (talk) 20:24, 2 August 2022 (UTC)