Talk:Carrauntoohil/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:19, 12 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments That's it for the first pass, so on hold. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 10:42, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I think you mean Arête rather than Arete. ✅
 * " larger mountain walking routes" by larger do you really mean longer? ✅
 * " as Old Red Sandstone" there appears no reason for this to be italicised. ✅
 * "The three levels of " why is three levels in italics? ✅
 * Indeed, a lot of the landforms noted are in italics, I don't think there's a good reason for that. – Being Ireland's largest mountain, I believe that some of these terms are reasonably widely known (especially amongst climbers), and thus have put into italics?
 * Devonian is mentioned in the infobox but nowhere else. ✅ updated Geology section
 * "3,000-foot (910 m) in " this shouldn't be adj=on! ✅
 * "steel cross. In 2014, this steel cross" repetitive. ✅
 * " (Ballinskelligs Sandstone Formation)" is mentioned in the infobox but nowhere else. ✅ updated Geology section
 * "Climber and author Jim Ryan" avoid false titles, so "The climber and author.." ✅
 * "eleven shillings and two cents " not pence? Strange... ✅ - this must be pence
 * "70 cents " if this is Euro cents, link it. ✅
 * "A State-sponsored " why capital S? ✅
 * "the IT still " no clue about this abbreviation. ✅ Irish Times
 * "park?".[30]" remove the full stop. ✅
 * "n 2018; the" a comma rather than a semi-colon here. ✅
 * "attended over 40 fatalities" more than. ✅
 * " noting that "many in the" grammar doesn't work for me here.  many were?  or start the quote later, i.e. noting that many were..." ✅, started quote later.
 * " the col between" col is overlinked. ✅
 * " above the col of the" here too. ✅
 * Two single-sentence paras there, could they be merged into other appropriate paras? ✅
 * Check completeness of refs, i.e ref 33 has no accessdate. ✅
 * Make sure date formats are consistent, e.g. ref 21 uses ISO while others use DMY. ✅
 * DoBIH is overlinked. ✅
 * Iveragh Peninsula is mentioned as a category but nowhere else in the article. ✅ very good spot!

Response

Thank you for that, much appreciated. Have made all the above changes except for the use of italics for features - being Ireland's highest mountain, I think that these terms are more widely known, and thus wanted to highlight? Looking forward to your comments. Britishfinance (talk) 11:47, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
 * No worries. Re: italics, I haven't seen anything in MOS either prohibiting or encouraging the use of italics in these circumstances (unless I'm mistaken of course) so I think as long as you apply a consistent approach i.e. italics for every single instance, then I probably can't quibble in this GA review.  Let me know your thoughts, and I'll do a final review later.  Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 12:03, 13 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Great . I have fixed it that where italics are used, it is consistent throughout. Hopefully, that works.  Thanks again. Britishfinance (talk) 12:34, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

Awesome, this is good to go, so promoting. Nice work. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 07:31, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Excellent, thank you for that :) Britishfinance (talk) 10:11, 14 April 2020 (UTC)