Talk:Carrie L. Hoyt

Untitled
This article is not well formatted or very clear. Fcsuper 19:56, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

The entry was just begun a few minutes ago. What exactly do you find unclear so far? Tmangray 20:22, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Flow
The flow of this article is confusing. The timeline it tries to establish is not well highlighted. I think this comes from unidentified sections. This article would be well served by employing the tag to establish the a common biographical format. Fcsuper 06:33, 2 May 2007 (UTC)