Talk:Carrot soup/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 06:48, 3 January 2016 (UTC)

GA criteria
: With modifications made according to the discussion in the below section, the article now complies with MOS policies on grammar, as well as structure/layout in general. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 03:13, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
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: In comparison to its current overall size, the article has a relatively vast bibliography of sources. As far as verifiability goes, no part of the text seems to be left to chance. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 10:21, 25 January 2016 (UTC)
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: The article decently covers all aspects of the topic one would expect to see covered. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 10:19, 25 January 2016 (UTC)
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. No biased expressions in the text. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 10:14, 25 January 2016 (UTC) . The revision history shows that the article has not been the subject of any edit warring since its creation. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 09:04, 25 January 2016 (UTC) : All images serve relevant illustrative purposes and use appropriate licenses. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 09:03, 25 January 2016 (UTC)
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Comments
There seems to be some repetition going on in the "French Cuisine" section. Take for instance:


 * "Potage Crécy is named after Crécy-en-Ponthieu, a French commune in Northern France that has been purported to have carrots with the best flavor within France." Wouldn't it flow better to say "Potage Crécy is named after Crécy-en-Ponthieu, a commune in Northern France that has been purported to produce carrots with the best flavor within the country" instead?
 * "In French cuisine, Crécy soup is typically prepared with rice, and may be served with a side dish of rice." Again, maybe to say "In French cuisine, Crécy soup is typically prepared with rice, which may also be served as a side dish"? Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 10:43, 25 January 2016 (UTC)


 * Hi – I have updated the In French cuisine section to reflect the wording you have proposed above, which is more specific and less wordy. Thanks for the suggestions. North America1000 21:10, 25 January 2016 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I forgot. Yes, that's much better now. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 03:11, 2 February 2016 (UTC)

With apologies for the delay, I believe the article now checks out as a qualified GA. Congratulations! Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 03:15, 2 February 2016 (UTC)